A beta reader is someone who reads your manuscript at some point in the draft stage and gives you feedback. When I ask someone to beta read, I'm looking for gut-level reactions from a "regular" reader--someone who isn't an editor, author, or in publishing--to the story, characters, style, and general entertainment value of the book
I'm just barely getting started in writing and publishing, so I'm definitely no expert on any of this, but I had a beta who gave me really helpful feedback on The Pyxis, which got me thinking about what made that person a good reader capable of giving the type of feedback I was looking for. Here's what I came up with.
My betas need to be:
1. Capable of giving blunt feedback.
Not just someone who's "honest," but someone who's outright blunt. This is the person who'll look at your banana-yellow sweater and come right out and say, "You can't wear THAT. That color is awful on you!" If I can use words like "nice" and "sweet" to describe a person, odds are that person is not a good fit to beta read for me. It's just a waste of my time and theirs if a beta is afraid to be straightforward.
2. Well-read, and possibly book clubbers.
My ideal beta is someone who reads a lot, and in a variety of genres including (duh) the genre of my manuscript. (Some writers say a beta needs to be in the target audience, which to me implies a certain demographic. I don't care as much about demographic as I do about the beta being familiar with my genre. A subtle distinction, maybe, but to me they're different.) My superstar beta made me realize that long-time book clubbers are great candidates for beta reading. They're accustomed to reading analytically, rather than mindlessly for entertainment, because they know they're going to have to hold up their end of discussion at book club. Good book clubbers make notes as they read, which is exactly what I want a beta to do.
An unexpected side benefit with my superstar beta was that her club had read a lot of debut novels. She explained that she and her club had a sort of running list of common mistakes first-time authors seem to make more often than experienced authors. They included things like plots that wander too much, failure to satisfactorily tie things up in the main story and subplots, and ending the book at a point in the story that doesn't feel quite right. This was an invaluable perspective for me, and not something I would have thought to look for in a reader. (She said my manuscript didn't commit anything on her list of debut author missteps. Yay!)
3. Able to capture top-of-mind reactions.
I think this is another thing that book clubbers tend to do well. They're tuned in to their reactions, in the moment, when they're reading. I want a beta who will make a note when she laughs, feels confused, has a moment of frustration or anticipation--all those little reactions that more casual readers breeze past.
A Rule I DON'T Follow:
One of the most common pieces of advice on this topic is to NOT use friends or family as betas. My superstar beta? She's my sister. I think if the person is the type of reader you want, capable of giving you the type of feedback you need, other "rules" don't matter much.
More reading:
Great blog post on beta reading by Evelyn Lafont: How Beta Readers Can Improve Your Book
Know of other good blog posts on this topic? Put links in comments, and I'll add them.
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Great post! And I love that your sister is your superstar beta!
Thanks for reading and commenting, Bri and Penelope! :)
I agree with you and I also have a friend beta read for me. She is awesome and tells me like it is. I just re-wrote two entire chapters because she basically told me they sucked. LOL.
Hey Krystal! Thanks for commenting. Yeah, I'd much rather hear some harsh feedback than have someone say, "This is great!" when it actually sucks, 'cause that's no help at all! :)
I have to agree with you on pretty much all of it. I def want someone who tells me like it is, not pats me on the back. Someone who care about you and your story will NOT say, OMG love it! It's amazing! They will not let you put your book out there unpolished. I do the same for my CPs and beta books. It's meant in love and understanding that we all have the same goal and want to help each other. Great post!
Thanks for stopping by, Trisha!
Excellent post...and excellent advice on the "do not use family/friends rule". If they do what you need of them, it matters none if they're in your personal life!
Thanks, Jamie! Usually I'm not much of a rule breaker, but sometimes it just makes sense. :)
I agree with the rule you DON'T follow! I use a couple of uber-nerdy girlfriends of mine who are grammar loving, intellectuals that read a ton and have plenty of helpful advice to offer.
Great Post. If I could take on another Beta Partner right now, I think I'd be your girl. Blunt is my speciality. Honest, yeah...I've got that. Feelings...Um, yup in abundance while reading and a person who reads broadly -- that's me. Damn. Now I wish I had more time. I've been accused of being too blunt and honest with my feedback. I told that person to give their book to their grandma so she could pat them on the head and tell them how nice it was. That ain't me! But, now I have a great Beta reader: ) xoxoxo
@Heather: Uber-nerds are the best! You're lucky to have such helpful friends. Thanks for commenting!
@Demetra: You sound like my perfect beta! And your comment made me laugh, so all the better. Thanks for stopping by. :)
I have to say I love your rules! Now I feel I know what to look for in a beta reader. Thanks again!
Thanks for stopping by, Rene! Glad you found them helpful!
Lots of good points. I am my best friend's Beta reader. It is something I really enjoy. Donna
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I tagged this post a long time ago and finally got around to reading it! I just had my grown niece do a beta read of my middle-grade novel. It was GREAT! She was all of those things that you mention. And I have so many positive interactions built up with her that the blunt comments don't have the same ouch as they might with others. Her feedback was invaluable.
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